Baby

 

You are

A long time

Coming

 

Now

All time is

Your time

 

My time is

Yours since

Before

 

But your

Time is

Not mine

 

It is yours

I get to

Watch it

 

Feel how

You are not

In me

 

But you were

There you

Grew

 

Into a paw

Of blood

And time

 

It felt good

To share

To receive

 

Now I live

To give

You time

 

Written 2013

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24 thoughts on “Baby

  1. Total giving, selflessness…… That is what true life and love requires. Your words elevate that notion so lovely….. I get the feeling you are speaking of a mother’s love for her child, but also think this could apply to a woman’s love for her life parter. And in light of the truth I have found, which is that women are almost entirely giving creatures, I just want to add that you guys not only just give us men your time, and then allow us to keep our own time, but you let us keep the TV remote as well. Man, I love you guys.

  2. your poem is so beautifully simple and profound, and each word tugged a little harder on my paternal heart strings, it reminded me of the times i would talk to my daughter when she was in her mommy’s belly, and now she’s 13.

    and it’s still her time…ty for so much this poem.

  3. ty so much for this share Ana, i was thinking about this today, and i’m not sure i’ve heard anyone say that before, that they miss their belly, and i’m struggling a little trying to convey how warm a memory that is for me too.

    when my daughter’s mommy head her belly, sure it took a little time to adjust, but in time i came to love her belly and everything it meant. and there was a part of me that missed it when she came home after giving birth. it’s not something i’ve ever talked about before, and i wouldn’t have thought about it, if not for your sharing, ty.

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